#10 Longshanked poker?

[Jakub P.]

I even don't know if something like longshanked poker exists. If not, I believe it should

Self-critique:
- I still can't handle with the final finish. I tried few ways and can't achieve the mirror finish and contrast staining
- I'm not entirely happy about the stem. Though, I believe it looks better when you compare it with my 9th pipe. Don't you think?
- This time I didn't forget to taper the shank towards the stem. But the taper I did (0,5 mm) might be not enough.

As always, I appreciate all comments. Thanks.

[sandahlpipe]

The stem is all weird.
1. It appears to be thinner by the saddle than behind the button. The taper should go the opposite direction.
2. Your button is wider than the blade of the stem. Don't do it that way.
3. I don't see a need to have a fishtail on that stem at all. Since your button is about the same width as the shank, just make your stem have straight sides.
4. The inlay would look better if it were maybe half as long and with an equal distance between stem face to inlay and inlay to saddle.
5. Your slot is not smooth inside. Take the extra few minutes to sand the slot smooth to 600 grit.

The rest isn't bad. Taper the shank about 1 degree so it gets slightly thicker towards the bowl and thinner towards the shank face. The chamber looks gnarly. If those are burn marks, take the time to sand them out. And if I'm being picky, the stain looks like you buffed off too much of it around the rim and bottom of the bowl. You can round the corner off just slightly before staining, just to break the sharp edge, or be more careful when buffing.

[Jakub P.]

Thank you Jeremiah, you've been most helpful.

[Charl]

Shank/bowl transition is looking cool for a number 10. Focus on your stems now, they need it.

[calsbeek]

you are progressing fast. Jeremiah's critiques are no-nonsense and will help you towards artisanship.
you're on your way.
nice focus.

[Jakub P.]

Hi folks. Thanks you so much for all your comments.

Quick update:

I just wasn't ready to throw this pipe on a pile along with all others and decided to improve the contrast staining. I haven't changed anything else.

[DocAitch]

Jakub, looks better.
Around the top of the rim, the dark stain hasn't been sanded enough.
Try using something like a sanding stick ( a stick about the size of a pencil with a narrow strip of sandpaper over the end , I use one with a flattened tip) to gently 'erase ' the dark stain, like you were erasing a stray pencil mark.
DocAitch

[Jakub P.]

Great tip, Doc. I'll give it a try in future pipes. In this particular pipe I'd like to keep it as it is. It gives a nice impression of vintage pipe with burned rim.