I haven't made comments on someone's work in a while, but I'm promted jump in because I have a contrary view to a previous comment.
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I'm going to suggest that you did not nail the shank/bowl junction. You did improve
greatly in that area compared to the pot you made; however, now that you have learned to cut away the unnecessary bulk in that area you need to work on the line of that cut.
In the photo with the stem facing left, the bowl/shank junction forms a straight line that goes down at an angle and makes a slight point at the bottom of the bowl. Making that area curve to match the curve on the side of the bowl that the shank does not enter would look much better.
In the photo with the stem facing to the right, you did a much nicer job with the curve on the junction, but it is cut in too far. It looks like part of the bowl is missing.
The best way to summarize is probably just to say that for a shape like that, I like to go for symmetry along the vertical axis of the bowl.
At the top of the bowl, the curve suddenly changes about 1/4" from the rim. There is a nice curve, then bang, it goes much more steaply to the rim. I'd suggest continuing on the original curve.
All that said because you ask for an honest look. All in all, you made drastic improvements over the pot. That is a very nice effort for as few pipes as you have made!!
Tyler