Could have done a few more things ...
* Taken a bit more off the top of the shank where it intersects the bowl
* Defined the shank/bowl intersection a little better on the bottom (@ 5 & 7 o'clock)
* Spent more time with the tripoli getting some more stain off to show off the grain better
* The stem.... well, it looks too long,
and the internals are lacking. Should open the airway and flare the slot.