Charl wrote:Getting there!
I would have dropped the osage orange. It has no use, in my eyes, if it is the same colour as the stummel.
+1
I think that's a nice pipe. I wouldn't argue with the shank being a tad longer, but it's nice. As noted, the stem needs a few alterations as well. Those are pretty easy to read, identify and learn about.
Let me preface the next bit with a common disclaimer: I have no idea what your goals are with pipe making - if you're just enjoying learning to make a pipe, then you've made an excellent "hobby" pipe, and you should be proud of it. If you're trying to earn an income at it, then this is a bit more scrutiny.
Aside from the above, the one thing that stands out to me, is the long straight line on the bottom of the shank that runs basically from the back of the bowl to half way up the stem. It looks rigid, and it needs more flow. It's essentially a straight shank that you've rotated to intercept the bowl at angle X. A lot of maker's early pipes look like this - mine included. If you extend the curve past the back of the bowl, you'll have a more graceful pipe. See the below:
![Image](http://images.smokingpipes.com/products/002-381-0067.jpg)