I'll toss out a penny's worth of thought.
I think it's good stuff, there are a couple details which could use some cleaning up however.
The cheeks of the bowl don't look like they're shaped quite right, looking at the profile shot they feel a bit contrived, like they don't flow with the rest of the lovely curves. I think that's what throws this otherwise lovely design off.
The last detail is in the stem work, the button could use some weightloss, and the bit also looks a bit thick. The stem bend looks pretty nice- which is always a pain with churchwardens.
I hope this helps
Cheers!
Yeti