I like the pipe in general, however to my eye there are some shaping details that bother me. The pipe looks too front heavy. This means either you didn't take enough material off the chin, or you took too much off the bottom of the shank. Always pay attention to your shank diameter. Looks a bit inconsistent. The transitions look pretty good, though.
Is that big dark spot a flaw? If it is I would have rusticated the whole thing.
Overall, good job. You're progressing quickly. A lot quicker than I did.
