small apple

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BrianMadsen
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small apple

Post by BrianMadsen »

Just finished this one. I think it came out quite nice, at least for my number 22.
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sandahlpipe
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The fit and finish looks good and the symmetry seems pretty good from what I can tell. I've got two things to nit pick on.

1. The sides of the stem should either be straight from saddle to button or have a fishtail at the end that is wider than the saddle. I wouldn't do a dip in the sides.

2. The front and back curve of the bowl (from the profile view) don't match. It doesn't matter much whether you keep the chin the same and make the cheeks match the chin or vice-versa (for the next one) but they should be the same curve.

Other than that, you're on the right track. Keep up the nice work!
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