Not a lead pipe....
I'm in the process of writing a story that has a pipe (A Dunhill 1/4 bend bulldog) as a primary focus. Greg Pease's tobacco is also mentioned.
I'm wondering if anyone might be interested in reading it and offering feedback?
Please let me know. I'm up to about 21 pages right now (I think), and I can provide a link to where it's at, or email it to whomever.
Anyone interested????
Aadomeit
A story with a pipe in it
A lot of twist & turns. You had me going in the first chapter. I thought o-no not another Danielle Steel type of book. Almost put it down, but said "no" I said I would read it. Glad I did. Don't get me wrong, Danielle Steel is a great writer. I read a few of her books out on the Oil Rig's, when I was working off shore. I am more the Louis L'Amour & Mickey Spillane type.
It's a little choppy, had to go back a time or two catch up with the plot. But that could be from reading of the PC monitor. Never read book that way before.lol You have the two main actors defined well. As I pipe smoker, would like to read more about the pipe & tobacco the old boy is into.
Looking forward to reading more. When you have it ready, just e-mail it. Thanks for sharing your work.
JB
It's a little choppy, had to go back a time or two catch up with the plot. But that could be from reading of the PC monitor. Never read book that way before.lol You have the two main actors defined well. As I pipe smoker, would like to read more about the pipe & tobacco the old boy is into.
Looking forward to reading more. When you have it ready, just e-mail it. Thanks for sharing your work.
JB